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When it’s improper to use “where”

A word I frequently see misused is “where.” Writers often use it instead of the more appropriate “that” or “when.”

“Where” refers to a place or location. Be careful not to use when it does not have this meaning.

Incorrect:
Last week, there were two occasions where the photocopier malfunctioned.

Correct:
Last week, there were two occasions when the
photocopier malfunctioned.

Incorrect:
I saw in the report where our shipments arrived late three times last month.

Correct:
I saw in the report that our shipments arrived late three times last month.

Again, “where” refers to a location. Correct: Please let us know where you wanted the package shipped.


Regards,
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Jane Watson
Trainer, Consultant, Speaker

Author of Business Writing Basics and The Minute Taker's Handbook

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